LoveSlater's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[animator vs animator.pt.3]

Gostei

É bom ver mais animadores brasileiros aqui no portal! O flash de vocês saiu bem maneiro. Continuem o bom trabalho! A galinha gigante foi dez!

[Busy Beaver vs Lazy Bear]

Lags alot dude

You've set the frame rate too low and your animation , as a result , looks too choppy.
Thus, you didn't compress this flash at all so it is far too large for its size - 9.6MB is too much for this! Because you didn't compress , you made the viewer wait unnecessarily too long and this will negatively impact your score.
Furthermore, I'd like to point out that you need a preloader. Animations without a preloader are a telltale sign of an inexperienced animator. This also hurt your score.
Finally, try tweening . All of this FBF was unecessary for this animation. Not only tweening would've made it look better but also would have saved you time. Generally, IMO , you should only use FBF for special effects or fight scenes - other than that it's just a hassle.

Hey I hope this helped. Good looking man.

[Child Stars Have It Rough]

$$$

The things that people do for money...!

[:Sparring Match:]

Loved it

U got a future in animation , i'll tell you that! I'd love to see something longer from you! peace out

Kero-the-boy-killer responds:

i promise my next one will be longer ^^

and... it will make more sense >>;

[C L O C K W O R K]

Different concept

I enjoyed this - I like the idea that the entire structure of the world is dependent on that guy hammering that machine. When he stopped working , everything just fell apart and it felt as if the entire universe didn't make sense anymore. When he finally comes back and the clock gets fixed , it was as if nothing happened. Rather, the entire universe regressed in time and undid itself. I expected a happy ending there but I guess that would ruin the movie and not make it as challenging to the mind. Thus, in the technical side I felt like you accomplished alot in just 2 weeks worth of work - imagine what you can come up with 1 month of work! In short, great movie dude! 9/10

My suggestion on your next movie is to be a little more careful when choosing how you want to pace your movie because in some parts I felt as if the movie was rushed while in others I felt as if the scene was dragged on for too long.

lokijki responds:

Thanks for the review. The pacing problems were mainly do to the fact that the movie had to be at least 2 and a half minutes, hence things like the way to long ladder climbing sequence. Then the rushed parts were just to get the movie done by the deadline. Hopefully when I start a movie on my own time it'll have better pacing, thanks for the criticism.

[Hannah Montana Gets Aids]

catchy

That was a damn good idea which i wish i had thought of before! Making a flash about Disney's favorite cash cow talking about her newly acquired sex disease! What a brilliant role model for kids and young adults alike! I don't know where you got that video but it was hilarious!

*One thing to improve though*

- Well, you could've made her mouth move... i mean, i'm not talking about lipsynching but making her mouth sort of move to add some life to it.

[Fat Badger's: Apocalypto]

Damn son

this shit is hilarious!

[Reiko - Captive Audience]

Substandard , dissapointing , and yet intriguing.

An honest description of what you are about to see :

1)Before you open this flash , you are told that this flash was made by Illwillpress all over it!

2)You open the flash and you see a little gothic chick skating over an icy surface for not even 30 seconds while a sad , melancholic loop plays on the background. There are dead bodies underneath it.

3) The flash is over. Really. You are left puzzled and confused with what you just saw and yet somewhat intrigued by how this flash's score managed to get so inflated.

5) You snap back into reality. You just witnessed yet another monstrosity made by IWP.

TaintedInk responds:

Your review is unfair and abusive. Even if you did not enjoy it, calling this cartoon "substandard" or a "monstrosity" is certain unfounded criticism. You saw the name of the author and obviously had judged the material negatively before watching it. Next time judge the material on its own merit, and not according to your irrational grudge against the artist.