More like Super Furry Nintendo Porn ...
Now , animation and graphics wise - i have no complaints and i'm pretty impressed with what you guys did. However, content-wise - some jokes were funny, others could only be understood by people who really play those games alot but that's not what ruined it for me. The P-O-R-N did.
Thus, I feel that the score of this submission is this high only due to its pornographic contents and in order to improve , y'all need to get your shit together and quit the porn business because you got the talent and this flash does not make justice to what you got.
É bom ver mais animadores brasileiros aqui no portal! O flash de vocês saiu bem maneiro. Continuem o bom trabalho! A galinha gigante foi dez!
Lags alot dude
You've set the frame rate too low and your animation , as a result , looks too choppy.
Thus, you didn't compress this flash at all so it is far too large for its size - 9.6MB is too much for this! Because you didn't compress , you made the viewer wait unnecessarily too long and this will negatively impact your score.
Furthermore, I'd like to point out that you need a preloader. Animations without a preloader are a telltale sign of an inexperienced animator. This also hurt your score.
Finally, try tweening . All of this FBF was unecessary for this animation. Not only tweening would've made it look better but also would have saved you time. Generally, IMO , you should only use FBF for special effects or fight scenes - other than that it's just a hassle.
Hey I hope this helped. Good looking man.
Ok but could have been better
I think you could have done a better job in parodying Egoraptor like you could have poked fun of his Metal Gear and VG stuff but overall , it was alright.
Spiderstick - nice concept
Man oh man! This toon was breathtaking! To see Spiderstick going about town and dealing away with the bad guys with such agility and grace of movement was awesome! It was fantastic!
Would a series based on Spiderstick be in the works or is it just a one time thing??! I sure hope we have more of it!
The things that people do for money...!
U got a future in animation , i'll tell you that! I'd love to see something longer from you! peace out
i promise my next one will be longer ^^
and... it will make more sense >>;
I enjoyed this - I like the idea that the entire structure of the world is dependent on that guy hammering that machine. When he stopped working , everything just fell apart and it felt as if the entire universe didn't make sense anymore. When he finally comes back and the clock gets fixed , it was as if nothing happened. Rather, the entire universe regressed in time and undid itself. I expected a happy ending there but I guess that would ruin the movie and not make it as challenging to the mind. Thus, in the technical side I felt like you accomplished alot in just 2 weeks worth of work - imagine what you can come up with 1 month of work! In short, great movie dude! 9/10
My suggestion on your next movie is to be a little more careful when choosing how you want to pace your movie because in some parts I felt as if the movie was rushed while in others I felt as if the scene was dragged on for too long.
Thanks for the review. The pacing problems were mainly do to the fact that the movie had to be at least 2 and a half minutes, hence things like the way to long ladder climbing sequence. Then the rushed parts were just to get the movie done by the deadline. Hopefully when I start a movie on my own time it'll have better pacing, thanks for the criticism.
That was a damn good idea which i wish i had thought of before! Making a flash about Disney's favorite cash cow talking about her newly acquired sex disease! What a brilliant role model for kids and young adults alike! I don't know where you got that video but it was hilarious!
*One thing to improve though*
- Well, you could've made her mouth move... i mean, i'm not talking about lipsynching but making her mouth sort of move to add some life to it.
That's not bad, buddy
I thought Milano Crew was dead. O well, guess i was wrong!
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