LoveSlater's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[:Sparring Match:]

Loved it

U got a future in animation , i'll tell you that! I'd love to see something longer from you! peace out

Kero-the-boy-killer responds:

i promise my next one will be longer ^^

and... it will make more sense >>;

[C L O C K W O R K]

Different concept

I enjoyed this - I like the idea that the entire structure of the world is dependent on that guy hammering that machine. When he stopped working , everything just fell apart and it felt as if the entire universe didn't make sense anymore. When he finally comes back and the clock gets fixed , it was as if nothing happened. Rather, the entire universe regressed in time and undid itself. I expected a happy ending there but I guess that would ruin the movie and not make it as challenging to the mind. Thus, in the technical side I felt like you accomplished alot in just 2 weeks worth of work - imagine what you can come up with 1 month of work! In short, great movie dude! 9/10

My suggestion on your next movie is to be a little more careful when choosing how you want to pace your movie because in some parts I felt as if the movie was rushed while in others I felt as if the scene was dragged on for too long.

lokijki responds:

Thanks for the review. The pacing problems were mainly do to the fact that the movie had to be at least 2 and a half minutes, hence things like the way to long ladder climbing sequence. Then the rushed parts were just to get the movie done by the deadline. Hopefully when I start a movie on my own time it'll have better pacing, thanks for the criticism.

[Reiko - Captive Audience]

Substandard , dissapointing , and yet intriguing.

An honest description of what you are about to see :

1)Before you open this flash , you are told that this flash was made by Illwillpress all over it!

2)You open the flash and you see a little gothic chick skating over an icy surface for not even 30 seconds while a sad , melancholic loop plays on the background. There are dead bodies underneath it.

3) The flash is over. Really. You are left puzzled and confused with what you just saw and yet somewhat intrigued by how this flash's score managed to get so inflated.

5) You snap back into reality. You just witnessed yet another monstrosity made by IWP.

TaintedInk responds:

Your review is unfair and abusive. Even if you did not enjoy it, calling this cartoon "substandard" or a "monstrosity" is certain unfounded criticism. You saw the name of the author and obviously had judged the material negatively before watching it. Next time judge the material on its own merit, and not according to your irrational grudge against the artist.

[The Swell Collab 10]

Interesting

I've watched a few of your swell collabs and I must say, I'm impressed! Who could ever wonder that you could fit in so much content into such a tiny screen?! I liked all of the parts and all of my fav. authors ( rtil , badger , and zekey ) did a great job on it !

Take care

Muffin responds:

glad you enjoyed the swellness ;)