Very nice
For a quick flash that you've only spent a few days working on , this looks pretty good.
You've put a reasonable amount of effort of graphics and there's even a nice flow going on as far as it goes to the storyline.
The message is simple and able to be understood by anyone whose attention span lasts longer than one minute.
Unfortunately, the problem doesn't lie in the flash but in the audience. I hate being a pessimist but I've came to the obvious conclusion that NG will never learn the lesson in this flash.
Whenever we think that the audience is finally maturing itself and acquiring better taste , something idiotic comes along and sweeps its way to the top and dashes out any hopes of an artistic revival in this community.
Although this account is new , I've been coming to this site since 2004 and I've seen many changes taking place. Over the years, I've seen this place morphing into some sort of huge advertising web site for flash media producers and become increasingly more commercial.
This sort of environment favors hustlers like illwillpress who are just out to make a buck at the expense of this community which was in great part created by independent artists who actually spent time developing innovating concepts and tampering with controversial ideas.
Nonetheless , I am digressing a bit. It was a good flash , sir, and good luck on your next bigger projects ( Freetown )!
Take care.